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Broken-Wavelength

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I've seen this before.

Well, the story of this animation is pretty much the exact same concept from James Lee's "Make Snacks, Not War". (The title is even the exact same, but with synonyms instead of the original words) If you wish to make movies in the future, I would suggest you make movies with more original plots, not that is a carbon copy of an already existing work. But onto the actual animation, the animation was pretty choppy, and felt more like an automatic slideshow. Things I would suggest you do is raise the framerate (12, 24, or 30 fps are commonly used) and add more poses in between drawings. Also, music would be nice.

The series looks promising!

I have to admit, Kirbopher, this was pretty enjoyable to watch. Seems like that if this series is done in the right direction, it could be one of the best Newgrounds has ever seen. Your art got a lot better, I can tell you that, although I didn't really like some of the tweening you used. The script, while it did seem a bit cliche at times (and I thought the humor in this was a little lacking), did seem to get the job done as well. But the biggest strength did feel like it came from the acting. Everyone did a good job on their parts (especially LittleKuriboh and D-Mac). Overall, pretty good. Looking forward to what you and your crew will put up next time.

Well...

I'm a fan of some of your other works, and I can tell that you weren't trying to mock people with brain tumors. But, let's be honest, this whole cartoon was a pain to watch. If anything, I actually felt a little sorry for poor little Billy. In fact, this honestly felt more like those documentaries you were mocking rather than a comedic short. Now, I'm not gonna call you guys heartless monsters, nor was I offended by this cartoon, but, really, this whole thing was bought together in really bad taste.

But on the plus side, the animation was nice and the voice acting was somewhat decent.

Funny cartoon you got there.

I really enjoyed this flash you made. Not only was it pretty funny, but it was also well animated. I liked the Gone Too Far reference in the beginning.

That was amazing!

Great Frame by Frame, amazing choices of music, and a magician show that cleverly exemplifies the true spirit of madness day, excessive violence! I am really glad that this entry got the recognition it deserved. Nice work!

I liked it.

Gotta love good old fashioned satire! Not only is this the best use of tweening, IMO, but the writing was pretty genius! I love that Scott-Pilgrim like style you have. But, there are some cons I have to admit. the ending was pretty stupid. If you're making fun of the distracting marketing techniques on train stations, don't end it with the protagonist getting hit by a bus. It pretty much came from nowhere, didn't help with your message, and was all around unnecessary. Also, the voice acting could've been a whole lot better. The people pretty much sounded monotone during the whole thing. I enjoyed it though, and I am looking forward to your upcoming projects.

Pretty darn funny!

Visuals needed work, but I have to admit, I got a decent chuckle. Voice acting was also pretty nice.

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