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[Missed the Bus]

Hey, not bad!

This was pretty darn amazing for a first contribution to a website, and I'm impressed. The frame by frame animation was fluid for the most part, the art style (especially the backgrounds) looked really nice, and you chose a good song to animate this with. But one issue I do have is with the pacing of the animation during the begining and the ending. You should've shown the main character sleeping for a few more seconds before having the bus pass by, and also with her missing the bus the second time before she gave up. Also, sound effects wouldn't hurt.

SmashX5000 responds:

I thought so too, but at the same time I was a bit afraid of people just seeing the sleeping animation and getting bored. Guess I shouldn't have been concerned about that.

As for sound effects, I've been looking for SFX I could use, I just haven't had much luck. I'll keep searching so that the next episode can have more SFX, though.

[The Many Kirbys Collab]

Ehh...

Can't really say I found this enjoyable. This whole thing felt really sub-par in terms in humor, and a lot of the jokes didn't really seem to make fun of the Kirby franchise. A lot of the jokes could've been used for about pretty much any franchise. (For example, the Sword short could've also been used to make fun of Zelda or King Arthur, and don't even get me started on the Cook short) I will admit, though, some of the skits did have animation that was kinda nice (especially the Ninja short), but it's also not really the best I've seen either. I will agree that it was an improvement over the first collab, though.

FlashfireEX responds:

Fair enough. Thanks for the review.